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RE: The PROTON who fell in love with an ELECTRON | Part 2
I feel like this part is needed. You can't have a good love story if things go well all the way.
Again, I'm loving the way you are intertwining science with a love story. Personally I would like to see more science mixed up next time, even though I understand that there wasn't much to say on those regards on this part.
Keep up the great work, looking forward for the next part!
Thank you!
You're right that twists and turns make a story great!
I'll try to add more science in the upcoming parts..
That's great!
By the way, when I was studying cinema theory, my teacher told me that its ok to adopt certain genre stereotypes of storytelling because they work. They were studied and refined for years and years and became sucessful formulas for creators to convey their message in a more efficient way.
I don't know if this insight helps, but keep up the great job!