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RE: The house at the end of street - Chapter 4 - Original fiction
I'm a beginner at writing fiction... I've done academic work for years. The first fiction I tried on here was a murder mystery that was so bad I quit after 4-5 chapters... I'm getting a little better now I think.
I know I have enjoyed "The Lottery Council" and the two Night Gods works. I haven't read the real early stuff, I can only scroll back 4 months on your pages. Streemdev people responded when I asked about that, and they said it is a known glitch that happens.
That's ok... I still have my notes and I'm going to do a replacement of the last chapters all rolled into one. The most important part you read and the rst is just where he gets caught- tries- and finds God in prison. It's funny, when I was doing the rewrite of NG I I could see a lot of improvement between that and what I'm doing now.