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RE: Rooms Of Time - No escape - Chapter 1
Interesting premise. I suggest that you do a better job of proof-reading as there were a lot of typos. Also, you should put more effort into describing things - it gives the reader clues so they can visualize. Finally, that chapter was really rushed. Take your time, immerse the reader in it instead of just providing a passing fling...Success!
Thank you for your comments. Much appreciated. Things to note now in reading my writings (must remember to put a disclaimer on the bottom) My writings are to extend my creative writing ideas, so i'm not rushing as such i am doing first drafts. Secondly i am dyslexic. I do struggle to proof read but i cant always get people to do it for me. But thanks for the heads up, i will check it again. Glad you like the piece. Thats the main bit of positive feedback i am looking for :-)
Definitely put a disclaimer somewhere that says it's a draft. I applaud your efforts to overcome dyslexia! It is certainly an attainable goal!
Well i have written almost 5 books and another being constructed. When ready they will go to professionals for editing so it better be an attainable goal haha! Editors edit, writers write a shame i cant do both! :-)