Thank you for your comments. Much appreciated. Things to note now in reading my writings (must remember to put a disclaimer on the bottom) My writings are to extend my creative writing ideas, so i'm not rushing as such i am doing first drafts. Secondly i am dyslexic. I do struggle to proof read but i cant always get people to do it for me. But thanks for the heads up, i will check it again. Glad you like the piece. Thats the main bit of positive feedback i am looking for :-)