Ha ha. Yeah, I originally had an ending where he won out and it was kind of like an astral counseling service of something. But when I read it back I didn't like it too much and thought their has to be a twist somewhere. I went on a bike ride and this ending came to me in a flash. Much more satisfactory than the final 3-4 paragraphs I had originally. Thanks for your feedback and stopping by to read @cyemela