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RE: Astral Echoes - Short Fantasy Fiction
Well done. Thought Niran had the situation under control. Not so fast! LOL. This could turn into an ebook no doubt.
Well done. Thought Niran had the situation under control. Not so fast! LOL. This could turn into an ebook no doubt.
Ha ha. Yeah, I originally had an ending where he won out and it was kind of like an astral counseling service of something. But when I read it back I didn't like it too much and thought their has to be a twist somewhere. I went on a bike ride and this ending came to me in a flash. Much more satisfactory than the final 3-4 paragraphs I had originally. Thanks for your feedback and stopping by to read @cyemela