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RE: A Sacred Crop (Short Story) - Finish the Story Contest Week 42
You're absolutely right @bananafish
I have the feeling that you wanted to opt for a different stylistic choice, diverting from a more lyric approach. Am I wrong?
not wrong at all. I was actively going for a more matter of fact, action and dialogue orientated prose here rather than my usual cacophony of imagery ;-)
I really appreciate your feedback mate :)