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RE: The Writing on the Wall - Finish The Story: Week 46
Ha ha, yes Melinda chose the wrong guy to mess with, or rather the wrong group of ancestral spirits lol
Glad you enjoyed the story m8. This was an exercise in pace for me. I wanted it to be like a real slow build of creepiness with a shock of graphic gore at the end. I could definitely have spent another hundred words on the final paragraphs to make it more gut wrenching but ya know what they say... sometimes less is more 😉
I'll check out this week's FTS beginning tomorrow and have a crack if it grabs me by the toes like dirges did.
Thanks for reading @f3nix 🙂
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I found the moment of the great grandmother's statue scratching the message equally intense and scary. Well, in this edition my story had to keep high the bar after Dirge's one. I hope I accomplished the mission. It's one of those stories where I'd love your opinion 🙂