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RE: Untilted Series: Bloodsport 1.0 [An Intro. ~600 words]
Thanks for the 'pointers' :D
Viewpoint is so challenging! It's something I took for granted when reading, it's not something noticeable just being a reader. I like using present tense, somewhat natural to me. I started using it writing for a character who lives 'in the now' only, and just got a habit of it I suppose, as I didn't think about it when I started this. Your tip about hindsight not working with it is really valuable to me, something to look for when I write in present tense, so I can try my best to make it work. For a writing excercise I will take a stab at past-tense. I appreciate the read and thoughtful comment, Michelle.
You're most welcome. Thank you for taking my advice gracefully :)