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RE: A Lonely Sound :: 50 Word Story
Poor wolf, losing his love. You fit a lot of story in these fifty words. I like the use of fragments:)
Poor wolf, losing his love. You fit a lot of story in these fifty words. I like the use of fragments:)
I'm not a huge fan of fragments in a short story except in limited cases, but from an 'animal' perspective, it seems to fit. Also helps that ever-present word count. :)
Indeed it does ... next time ... I am frayygment on these things:)