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RE: Forgotten Memories :: A Short Story
Really like this one. Had no idea what was going on, and I tried to stop reading, but I couldn't. Excellent! I love the ending, especially how you go from 'oh, that's what's going on' to 'wait, what?' in mere seconds, as a reader.
In short stories, I'm a fan of the 'double-twist' (probably not a real literary term), where you lead up to something and let everyone think it's the end, but then you stab then in the gut and run away before they can stop you. Thanks much for reading!