That's the first time I have published two versions of the same story. I think the first one was good, but after receiving feedback from one of the writing groups at the time I came to notice its flaws. And once i saw them I couldn't pretend they weren't there. But that didn't change the fact I still liked the story concept. I always wanted to return to it at some point, and give it its dues.

I think it's a more complete story now. The main issue was to get it into one characters perspective (there were mixed POV issues previously), and keep that consistent. Added descriptive elements, and a few other pieces. Not a lot really. But the reworking did give it a new feel. It was a good experience in editing - learning to let go of the deadwood in the story, adding new material that fits with the already written parts, and making it all gel now.