Thank you for sharing your feedback. Don't worry, you don't need to be an expert to have an opinion on a piece of work. As a reader you feel what you feel, and I love to hear what you get from it.

maybe emphasize the raining on them?

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I kinda pictured them under some kind of roof.

I shall look back over the story with this in mind. I had mentioned their possession being washed away, but perhaps that failed to fully show the rains on them, and them out in the open. Good point, thank you.

:)