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RE: A GLIMPSE OF THE FUTURE ...INUKE's fiction writing contest #6
Amazing imagination. I love the world you could create by going ahead of us in time. But 2042 is pretty close, buddy. Can this hold on a bit longer till mine and a next few more generations all go? It's a humble request. Hahaha.
My criticism would be that the tone isn't as fluid as can be. But that is permissible from the POV of a Historian that you have chosen. So it worked still. Keep doing this often.
Cheers!
Thanks for the comments. Actually the scenario of the pole shift, the movement of the solar system out of a protective cloud and the solar minimum, which has just started, are indeed happening. There is an excellent YouTube site (Suspicious Observers) that scours current published scientific papers and the like on this subject. Their projections, findings, seem to be well founded in good science. I must share that these folks take all of this quite seriously and as data accumulates are taking steps to inform people and prepare for ... well, challenging times. Worth keeping an eye on. If this all plays out it may indeed be one of those times when we bend over and kiss our asses good by.
I like how you wrote something fictional based on actual events and scientific phenomena about the galaxy and sociological guesses about the human race. That made it more believable in a way.
I sent you a text. I think a friend of mine who is also a minnow posted it to another Nigerian who is a whale and it got resteemed or something. This story is not worthy of 231 votes so someone must have done something. I'll take some time tomorrow and see if I can track it down.