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RE: [Original Short Story] Broken Pieces: A woman tries to erase her memories
Thanks Eric! And thats not a bad idea. Would you have broken this up into more than one story?
Thanks Eric! And thats not a bad idea. Would you have broken this up into more than one story?
You're welcome! I tried it with one of my last posts and it worked pretty well. I placed the breaks in-between the beginning, middle, and end. Segment each piece so it's strong enough to stand on its own and place the breaks at points of high drama so it keeps the reader wanting more.