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RE: [Original Short Story] Broken Pieces: A woman tries to erase her memories
Great job. This kept me engaged until the end! One suggestion for future short stories, divide one story up the into several posts, like a serial.
Thanks Eric! And thats not a bad idea. Would you have broken this up into more than one story?
You're welcome! I tried it with one of my last posts and it worked pretty well. I placed the breaks in-between the beginning, middle, and end. Segment each piece so it's strong enough to stand on its own and place the breaks at points of high drama so it keeps the reader wanting more.
I think this can work with some stories but this was just fine at this length and I think i'd be cheated if it ended at half. It works if the story is longer and has cliffhangers.
Great job with story, especially the ending..
Thanks @razvanelulmarin !