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RE: Does anyone know about the box?
What happened to the wife? Did her sleeping pattern become better? Also, did you notice the number 10 printed on the box every day?
What happened to the wife? Did her sleeping pattern become better? Also, did you notice the number 10 printed on the box every day?
The wife still slept poorly as they would disturb each other now. As for the box it is always the same with the number 10 printed on it.
I thought, for the story sake, it would be nice to make the wife's sleep pattern to improve proportionally to the protagonist's sleep pattern deterioration, while the numbers to decrement from ten down to 0 and then kaboom!
Good ideas that would work, I wrote and posted this this morning based on my dream last night. Not sure if it has the legs to be extended yet but will keep your ideas in mind if I do.