You have such a casually conversational way of doing dialogue, it's really easy to read and get into. well done, this was great!
You have such a casually conversational way of doing dialogue, it's really easy to read and get into. well done, this was great!
Thanks! :D Dialogue was something I really loathed when I first started writing... I felt like I was talking to myself, that all the characters sounded the same, and tried to limit conversations as much as I could. Now I enjoy it! :D