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RE: Borderline Madness - Finish the Story Contest, WEEK 21
I admit I needed the help of Google Translate for fully understand your ending. I wasn't sure if all the combat scene was happening fot real or in the mind of the man being devoured by the Those, and I was even usure if it was the Legionnaire or Sephon to be devoured!
Now, I think I understand everything and I can congratulate you!
To be fair @marcoriccardi, I noticed the end section of the story could be a little confusing. I'm glad it became clear on the second reading. P.s. it was definitely sephon who was being devoured as the legionnaire looked on in horror 😉