I'm almost tempted to do another one... I wrote this and then took my son to school, then stopped by the shops to grab a few things, and on the walk back home another 'cologne' related plot whipped into mind and brought tears to my eyes... mulling it over now because there might be something in it for a full story one day. :) Hooray for #freewrite prompts!!
Your descriptions are excellent to the point I almost smelled this man. Great characterization, too!
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Thank you! :D
I'm almost tempted to do another one... I wrote this and then took my son to school, then stopped by the shops to grab a few things, and on the walk back home another 'cologne' related plot whipped into mind and brought tears to my eyes... mulling it over now because there might be something in it for a full story one day. :) Hooray for #freewrite prompts!!