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RE: [Original Fiction] The Memoirs of a Forgotten Man - part two
Superb follow-up! This has such a poetic feel to it. You really have a way of setting a scene. The noir-ish approach really did this story justice, and the entire narrative was just so well written. Every line was striking and straight to the point. The reader couldn't help but feel a sense of urgency by the end. This series is undoubtedly off to a great start!
You're too kind. Many thanks for your feedback. I had a noir-ish feel in my head as I visualised this story developing. Like an old black and white movie. The poetic feel is an interesting observation. This actually wasn't deliberate but is how the narrative has emerged, and I think it works. I'm enjoying writing this particular story, which is a plus, so hopefully more of this will come soon.