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RE: A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 20) - The Hours Between 0000 and 0100
I never thought anyone would consider this one of the finest in the story so far, but I'll take that compliment, print it, frame it and put it above the fireplace. You're right when you pointed out the depression, dude. I still believe that your glasses are just a disguise and they don't serve any other function other than that. You, sir, are truly a scholar and a gentleman :D
Oh no, I can't be nabbing any of your titles! Isn't it sometimes the way though that the scene or chapter you are describing resonates with someone in a particular way. For me it was his dawning realisation that to struggle against it all with everything in his mind being predetermined was fantastic and really evocatively written! Hats aff to you!!
I would be greatly honored if you would nab any of my titles, dude!
I wanted to pepper this story with philosophical nuggets that makes readers question their existence. While I didn't want it to steal the thunder from the story, I want it to linger just enough to be thought provoking. I guess it what sets Ledd apart from Stewie! haha I'm glad it had the intended effect. I'll take your hat, dust it off, and wear it proudly, long enough before I realize you never meant to give it away haha!