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RE: Today Again: An Original Novel for steemit by dreemit Chapter Nine

in #fiction8 years ago

For a second there, I thought I had missed a chapter. I had been enjoying Lissa's chapters more recently, but this was a necessary installment toward their eventual reunion. Caleb's just so angry, and it really shows in the scenes you write for him, which is testament to the skill you put in to your work. There's just something so poignant about this chapter, and I'm glad that it fleshed out Caleb's backstory more. Great job once again, my friend! :D

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I'm glad you feel I'm capturing him well! I did like the way this chapter turned out :)
I've been thinking a lot about my book Reborn and I have decided to go for it. Not only will I be getting my 'baby' out into the world, but it will also give me a chance to take a breath. Today Again will continue, I think I'm going to confine it to weekends however, I'm hoping I can get a little ahead of the story that way :)
Quite honestly you're a large factor in my decision, I can't wait to hear what you think of it :) A number of people have read it, but only one other writer, and while her feedback was awesome, it can't compare to yours.
Thank you again...for being you!!!

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