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RE: Reborn: Chapter Fifty Three "The Plan"

in #fiction8 years ago

Woohoo girl power! That painful chastity belt thing that female vampires have is going to be put to good use way earlier than I expected. It's nice to have Anna and Jared finally crossing paths, but it's a shame they would need to be going through a tense encounter like this. Seeing as Jared and Anna might be the prophesied pair. Am I wrong? Wait, no, don't answer that haha!

I'm still kind of on the fence regarding the new guys, well except for Tyros. It's fortunate that he's the one getting the slow reveal treatment. I like how his story is developing outside the panel. Makes it seem that he's not adding to the clunk.

Oh by the way, I just realized that I made a mistake with Seth and Matthias identities' in a chapter entitled "Mistaken Identity" hahaha! Talk about self-fulfilling :D Overall, great "planning" chapter, my friend. I can't wait to read how they execute it.

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