Some aren't intentional, but all of the tense issues have already been fixed. I worked with @verbal-d to correct all of those errors, and I think we've ironed out at least 99% of it :D I just wasn't able to put in the edits because the window had already lapsed. If you could recall, I wrote this for NaNoWriMo last year, so I was in a bit of a rush haha

I'm glad you've been enjoying the story, dude! I just hope that I did the childhood perspective justice :)