A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 14) - The Hours Between 1800 and 1900 (Part 1 of 2)
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It was already dark when we arrived back at the prison. The sight of a slumbering creature greeted us upon our return. The creature looked remarkably like Coche, and it slept where Coche usually rested.
Unable to wake the foreign beast, Dadier instead commanded Coche to find a different spot. Coche obliged albeit begrudgingly. It decided to rest on the other side of the prison instead — the same side where I made my escape all those years ago.
"Are you sure that you're alright to sleep here?" I asked Coche.
It replied with a mild howl, then almost immediately fell to a deep slumber.
Dadier alighted before he released me from my restraint. The giant secured the large metallic gate before he came back to unstrap me. He opened Coche's side and allowed me to walk out on my own.
"Smart move," I quipped, looking at him approvingly. The giant didn't know that I had no plans to escape, but it's good to keep them on their toes. One day, they would let their guard down. That's when I'll pounce and ensure their downfall.
Wearing only short pants, the blades of grass tickled my legs. Tiny insects fluttered around the uncovered area. They kept biting my unprotected skin every chance they get. Their bites left swollen marks that caused an uncontrollable itch. I tried my best to swat them away, but they kept on pouncing. It was a bit ironic, considering that these insects think of me as a giant.
I loitered around the grounds for a while until Dadier beckoned me to follow him back to their fortress. It had been a long time since I've ever experienced the night, so I didn't want to cut it short.
The giant warned me that there would be consequences if I refused to comply. He turned his back to me, as he sauntered away.
A faint sound of metallic clanking started to echo soon after. A low deep growl that reverberated in the surrounding followed. There was a chill in the air, as silence engulfed the prison compound.
I ran towards Coche, but it refused to wake up from its slumber. I had hoped it could protect me from whatever eldritch horror lurked in the shadows. The fireflies were long gone, and the darkness crept up towards me inch by inch. It consumed me until I couldn't see anything. Terrified, I curled up into a ball and tried to summon enough viento to defend myself.
The creature remained invisible, but its chain rattled after it. I can feel its stare piercing through me, locking on to me, getting ready to pounce. The sound of its movement bounced off the walls of the compound. Its disorienting echoes made it hard to determine which direction it was coming from.
The ground trembled as the creature drew near. Even light was afraid of it, as I couldn't see a thing at that moment. I clenched my fist, getting ready to launch the most powerful attack I could muster. In that moment, I wished that I had the strange spheroid that aided me in destroying the giants' tank. If the rumors were true, that level of power might not even make a dent on the grotesque horror that was stalking me.
The grass shifted with the wind, and the clouds parted high above. Boxed into a corner, with nary a wall anywhere near, I quivered, bit my lip and closed my eyes. I had to rely on my reflexes to survive this gruesome encounter.
Without warning, a large paw patted the back of my neck. I jumped up and hurled ancient winds toward my opponent! Screaming my lungs out, I charged fist-first into battle. All of a sudden, a squishy blockade impeded my assault. I opened my eyes only to discover that it was, in fact, Dadier that I hit.
The giant seemed unfazed. He asked me if I saw the hideous creature, and if that was the reason I was running away.
"I was running into battle," I retorted. "You buffoon."
"O let's go back now," he suggested.
I looked back to see if the creature was trailing us but it was nowhere in sight. Faint traces of its growl and its chain still lingered, but it was getting fainter the more steps we took.
We walked towards the farthest fortress and encountered both of its wardens. Jenmu bore a strong resemblance to Mawmah and Lowla. While Lowla looked like a younger version of Mawmah, Jenmu seemed like a male equivalent. His constant companion, Molet, looked distinctly different though. Her skin glimmered like ivory, and she was slender than most giants I've seen.
I've often wondered why they were often seen together. Did they have a relationship like Mamie and Dadier, and Lowla and Lowlow? Were the giants designed to come in twos? I often dismissed that Mamie was a captive of Dadier, but I never thought about them being partners. If that was the case, then my sympathy for Mamie was woefully misguided all this time.
"Hello, Ledd," Jenmu greeted, with a menacing grin. He was holding a porcelain mug as he waved at me. "Did you have fun in your journey?"
Molet smiled, but stayed silent as she stood beside Jenmu, while holding a porcelain mug of her own.
Their fortress housed three more giants and a prisoner named Jool. She was about the same age as Teten, and was equally as tall. Were the other giants transformed former prisoners? Was this the fortress where they performed the final reconditioning? Perhaps that's why Teten was crying earlier. It might be that she had heard the news of her impending transfer here.
I walked past them without answering the question. Jenmu tried to hold me down, but I slipped his grip. The training from earlier was already paying off. Dadier stayed behind to converse with them, but I forged on toward the middle fortress.
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It's not often that I catch this hot off the press! I like the rather subdued nature to this chapter in comparison to the high energy of the playground. You did a superb job of capturing a summer night, with the stillness and the mosquitos, I could feel it, as often is the case when I read this. Even the dog felt like a part of a summer night (I'm guessing there was a dog)
Still really looking forward to the day I can read it all the way through, it will be interesting to experience it at that pace!
Excellent as always my friend :)
Was there a dog? I mean, was there really? I can't say for sure. Even though this is rooted in reality, it's still a work of fiction ... So, yeah... Haha!
Thank you for the compliment, my friend! I always look forward to reading your thoughts on every chapter. Oh, and congrats on the 2nd place finish on the #originaltag challenge! Well deserved :D
I won second place? lol, this is news to me! Where do I find this?
It seems you've found it. We were both surprised about it, too! Haha! Such a funny coincidence :D
I was! :)
I've just posted Part 2. It's silly but I was hoping that it was posted side-by-side with your newest chapter yet again haha!
I know this is a magnificent job! You have a great heart, you have tried me!
When you win the Nobel Prize for literature, please do not stop greeting me, haha.
Man, when I win the Nobel Prize for literature (or any award please Lord!), the only difference with my comments would be that I would sign it like:
HAHA! That would be an awesome title trading in "Novelist" for "Nobelist" hahaha! One can dream... Thanks for the compliment and for stopping by, mi amigo!
Oh yeah baby!! And in my profile i'm going to put: JEDAU's friend (Nobelist), haha
I'm sure that'll be something to brag about. Now, if only I could write that legendary story that would grant me that honor. HAHAHA!
Oh, and thank you for the Resteem as well! Much appreciated, my friend!
I know you can do it. You got it inside.
And you're welcome my friend, you deserve it!
I can't even get a hundred people to comment on my story! Haha! Thanks for the vote of confidence though, my friend. Much appreciated :D
Ahh I wanna know what he was about to engage in epic battle! XD I'm kind of thinking either a dog or he was hearing traffic and mistaking its proximity. Also he doesn't seem to have noticed that his viento had no effect on Dadier D:
Guess I'll have to wait for Silver Lining to find out :)
Thanks for the kind words, I'm glad you're enjoying the pic :D
Those are interesting suspects!! You may be on to something there.. or you're completely way off! Who knows? Not even I know the answer to that. Or, do I? :/
Did he not notice or did he not intend it to be? Is his powers dwindling or is he letting his guard down intentionally? Am I ever going to stop being mysterious about this?
This week's SILVER LINING was supposed to be thin, but @surpassinggoogle's Filipino Words initiative forced me to make it more meaty. And, just in time, too!
Thank you for gracing this humble story with such a heartfelt masterpiece. Trust that it'll be a staple of this story until the end :D As always, thanks for leaving entertainment commentary, my friend. I hope you and your family are continuing to enjoy your vacation :D
I could not help reading the first two paragraphs out to my sister in an over the top announcer voice XD vacation is awesome, full of happiness and laughing :)
And that's how I meant to sound like! Awesome! :D For reference, this is the exact tone I was going for:
Great to hear that you guys are having loads of fun on your vacation! With the kids growing up so quickly, it's so awesome that you guys are making the most of it :D
Another good un. I am fascinated. If this is a day in the clouds how it will end! It's what makes me read each installment eagerly. Not long now!!
How do days normally end? For some it's a drunken binge across several pubs, for others it's a torrid carnal affair. For me, it's a downward spiral after a flurry of creativity (my productivity kicks in after midnight ha!). What is it like for you, dude? Is it the same as Ledd's?
I'm so glad that you're enjoying the ride! Truly!! Coming from a writer whose work I admire, that is such a huge honor, and I will not tire of reiterating that. The countdown has begun indeed! Thanks for sticking with it, brother! :D
I shall stick with it until the end no matter what that may be. I hope little Ledd's viento can shield him from the alcohol fueled frenzy that the night is about to become ;0)
My productivity increases as the day goes on until night when it goes off the scale. Then i have to fight the idea of sleep or just finishing that last little bit!!! You are a marvelous writer dude, without a doubt!
What the!! :o I invoke my right against self-incrimination. I shall neither confirm nor deny the presence of alcohol in the story. -_-
Glad to have found a kindred spirit! It's a spectacular thing, this internet, bridging people that would otherwise be un-bridged :D
It is a spectacular thing isn't it. I am eternally grateful for the opportunity to chat and make friends with people on different continents!!
In days of old, we would just be passing each other without even knowing how alike we both are. A few years from now, we won't even have to use outdated technologies like kibos and computer screens. We'd just think of a thought and dinner arrives at our door haha!
I look forward to that day!!! Chip in head Sci Fi madness!!
Part 2 is up now while you wait for the technological singularity :D