No it wasn't too obvious ... it was more like a piece of good foreshadowing. You have to lay clues or you aren't being fair to the your audience. I think you did that well:)
That’s good to know! You lose all perspective on your own stuff after a while. Ideally I would have been able to step away from it, but I was up against the contest deadline. Thanks so much!
No it wasn't too obvious ... it was more like a piece of good foreshadowing. You have to lay clues or you aren't being fair to the your audience. I think you did that well:)
That’s good to know! You lose all perspective on your own stuff after a while. Ideally I would have been able to step away from it, but I was up against the contest deadline. Thanks so much!
I totally understand ... I write fiction too. Time is so essential to editing:)