Lovely story, @jasminearch! I love how you've captured a specific turning point in the main character's life. She can leave the past behind and focus on a new beginning, in multiple ways.

I also loved reading about your peer editing method. It sounds like a wonderfully creative process, and a great way to use collective talent for a much more refined result than you may have achieved on your own. Thank you for sharing that. I'm sure other Fifty Worders will be inspired!