Keep writing. Maybe don't skip them feelings, weave them within discovered moments, it might be what makes a story human. Thank yous for sharing @fisteganos.
Keep writing. Maybe don't skip them feelings, weave them within discovered moments, it might be what makes a story human. Thank yous for sharing @fisteganos.
I must admit I was probably being lazy and my excuse/explanation would be to say that the concept was that the guy was writing in his diary and didn't want someone else reading all he went through. I'll try not to be lazy next time lol. And thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.