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RE: The Restroom

in #fiction7 years ago

That one was apsu lutely plot bending. To the point that I wasn't sure how much longer I was going to be able to read.

I'm all for sugar and cream in my coffee as well as open public political discussion for everyone!

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Haha, sorry for doing that. I do hope people will think this is how I see men meeting at the remote restrooms.

No need to apologize. The timing of the twist was perfect. Great display of leading the thought process then switching it. It shows the power of what a writer can do, even in just a short few paragraphs.

Thank you, I'm enjoying the compliments but as I am Finnish, I'm not saying it outloud and I will not further comment on this in the fear of you saying any further compliments.

Lol. I promise to find some criticism next time. :)

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