Great story.

I like your usage of imagery, just grand.

While my mind played out the scenes in my head, this caught my attention

Mauraleus was staring at him with her one eye. The ladies from Berallius and their huge, staring single eyes always made him a bit unsettled. Like he might soil his drawers. Of course, he felt like that for most of his dates. Maybe that's what love felt like? He could never be sure, since he would always need to find a bathroom long before true love could blossom.

So typical of you to add funny bits here and there.

The ending was good though. Especially the way you just leave it dangling... Gives our minds something to think

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