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RE: Fractal Buddha with bonus Haiku

in #fiction • 7 years ago

My kid is a perfect, loveable savage.

That's adorable.

I love the story, especially the way you walk us though 'your perceptive' with such vividness.

I like the 'be the grown up' and ' It feels like stalemate now though' parts...

Really cranked me up

Thanks for sharing

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     7 years ago 

    Thanks iamthegray

    Your comments mean a lot. It's nice to get feedback on the actual writing innit.

    I'm going out now. Meant to look at your short story the other day but got sidelined. I'll get to that later today.

    cheers
    Anji :)

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       7 years ago 

      Smiles

      You're welcome

      Hope to get your feedback. Er... It's about 2500 words long... Wonders if it still qualifies as a short story.

      And please call me Gray.

      Blessings

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       7 years ago 

      Hiya Gray

      I've done your feedback. Got a bit carried away. It's nearly 1k words. I hope they're helpful to you.

      cheers
      Anji :)

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         7 years ago 

        I've read it. It was simply wonderful. And to think you could spare your time to do a mini-critique on my piece gladens my heart.

        Thanks a lot @anjkara

        I'm very grateful

        Blessings

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