RE: A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 22) - The Hours Between 0200 and 0300 (Part 2 of 2)
Goddamn, man! That was an epic journey you just took me on!
The sadness of seeing his mother utter her final words, the giant doppelganger and the disorientation it created, the massive beast at the end. Your imagination is honestly something to behold, @jedau!
I love the hidden messages within. The "Isle La View" play was awesome and I'm so glad he finally understood it's meaning. But the giant twin. An anger against himself manifesting in through "tiny" Ledd's attack maybe? It's all intriguing stuff and so so beautifully pieced together.
What a magnificent talent you are on this platform. Loving your work and am so happy you're growing so fast in popularity. A consummate artist never goes without receiving their dues. You fit into the category perfectly. :)
Brilliant stuff, my bro. :)
I definitely leaned heavily on the philosophical aspect, brother! I'm glad you noticed that :D You know, when I was younger, my imagination was way more vivid, I just wish I got into writing earlier so that those worlds wouldn't have been lost to time.
I just wish my follow-ups to this story is as well received as well. My biggest fear is peaking too early. Heck, I haven't even written a single word for any follow-ups yet! Haha! Their just all raw ideas.
I'm just so thankful for all the support you guys have given me. If it weren't for all of you, I don't know if I would've made it this far in the story. It's always great to know that I'm writing alongside my esteemed peers. That feeling of camaraderie is worth more than any amount of STEEM :D