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RE: Dead i. A Steemit Original Fiction Series. Episode 3

in #fiction6 years ago

Truth to say, i have not read the previous episodes, but this particular one is more of a stand alone story.

And it hits deep into the mechanics of relationships, of family life, of love. In short, of how that true lover, will always seek for excuse upon excuse to hang on, to wait, to give you that last one chance.

And in so doing, they refuse the right long won, of giving up on you. Often, the blame is cast to the world outside, and all its Chaos, just as Kayla does...

Its all too complicated anyway...the things we do for love.

I should read the previous two episodes. I am a reader, and writer, so i tell myself. And i do some writing tryings! So you should know i am genuinely interested in your works.

And by evidence of this, i have to say you write well. The story line is as clear as it can possibly be. You can imagine an episode here but almost about being good enough as a stand-alone story. Cheers! @arbitrarykitten.

Meanwhile, Its been a while since you did a freewrite, or have i missed any you did recently?

Either way, I am today's encourager for #freewrite. Here with a special delivery from @marriannewest: the latest prompt.

https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-123-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-fumigate

We miss your freewrites, and wait to read more.

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Love is complicated mess of chaos and beauty, pain and pleasure... isn't it?

You are correct, I have not done a freewrite in a little while. I think I am going to accept your challenge... I will post the link here :)

Please do! Waiting- Thanks.

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