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RE: Reborn: Chapter Thirty Seven "The Vision"
I definitely didn't want to spend too much time having Anna wallow, but still convey that the ordeal she went through was a big one. In her character development each hard lesson she learns can't be dismissed yet needs to serve to make her stronger.
Thank you for the encouragement my friend! I now understand what you mean about interweaving, I think I do a bit better job of that from here on out.