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RE: A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 4) - The Hours Between 0800 and 0900
Once again a spectacular chapter in the life of Jedd!! I can truly feel every nuance of his struggle, vividly see the outdoors and imagine trying to make it there, the soft warmth of mamie, the frustration with their loud talking, the way he feels about the baby...all of it is just put across so incredibly well. I think this might be favorite chapter yet, I really felt that hour transpire, full of sensation. Beautiful!
Thank you for the kind words, my friend. I'm glad it was translated effectively! I really had trouble trying to convey a lot of things at once, so I just winged it. I'm going to expound more about it in the latest Silver Lining post coming in 2 days. The struggle is indeed real, and the story is going to ramp up sooner than later. As always, I appreciate your continued support! The comments are simply amazing :D
Awesome compliments! :D @jedau has so many wonderful stories stored, he just gets easily discouraged and I end up being the only one who has the pleasure of enjoying his tales. It's nice to know that his stories are gaining readers and he's receiving support from others as well.
Why thank you, every one of those compliments are well-deserved ;) I discovered him in a comment section, and just the way he put words together there caused me to check out his fantastic blog!
That's awesome to hear!
Thanks for constantly pushing me to succeed! One of these days I do believe that we'll reap the rewards of all our efforts :D
Wait... I thought his name was Ledd.
Lol, it is Ledd, it's actually a mixture between his cousin's real name- Zepp, and his own name Jed :)
Ah!
Hm, I realize now that that explanation doesn't quite make sense unless you read that particular silver lining LOL:)
I thought it made sense.