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RE: A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 20) - The Hours Between 0000 and 0100

in #fiction7 years ago

Aww. I am so sad for him right now, it's as if his purpose was just taken away.

I can completely put myself in Ledd's shoes viewing the 'kibo' and 'damaus' as sentient beings because I did the same thing with inanimate objects. In fact one of my favorite cartoons when I was little was called The Brave Little Toaster. It was a similar premise to Toy Story but with appliances instead of toys.
Even though this installment turned out sad, it continues in excellence :)

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I know, right? Imagine if you live your life believing one thing, and suddenly realize that everything is a lie and all the things that you have done have been for naught. I really wanted to build him up and tear him down on the way to the finale.

I think I've seen that Toaster cartoon before, though I might've been too young to remember. As you know, I'm a generally happy chap, but I don't know what it is about heartbreaking scenes. I really enjoy writing them (I don't know if that's the proper way to put it haha!)

Thanks for stopping by, my friend! Your encouragement hasn't wavered until the end :D

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