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RE: My100: Original One-Paragraph Story Hooks 60 and 61
Thanks. I'll play around with #60 some more--it's a story I like, but it never quite came together the way I wanted it to, and part of that is, I think, the open. It's just a bit off. I like your suggestions.
And I promise to enable and encourage your addiction. Sorry in advance. ;-)