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RE: The Lottery Council- Chapter X: @JMeOff99
Mmmmmm. That's solid. Following this for sure.
I like the tone you strike between the two messagers--I can easily tell them apart without tags on the dialogue. That's surprisingly hard to do, and you've done it well here.
Thanks a lot! That's my biggest concern...I hate writing dialogue! After a lifetime of academic writing, I'm kind of new to writing fiction. I'm glad you told me because every time I post I think- I hope the dialogue is clear.