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RE: Love among the redwoods - a short story
I enjoyed your weaving in the California scenery in the story, especially the redwoods at the end and how they allowed Franny to put things in perspective.
But I most enjoyed how easily you conveyed some complex emotions within a relationships here. Great story @jayna
Thank you, @cizzo. Like you, I really enjoy the flash fiction format as a way to explore fairly complex ideas in a condensed little story. They can be surprisingly impactful.