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RE: Weekend Freewrite 6 - Down on Maggie's Farm

in #fiction7 years ago

I like this a lot. There is not a lot of detail, but there is enough on which to hang memories from one's own childhood. I know those louts on their bikes and the shopkeeper. I never knew Auntie Maggie, but I could have.

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Thanks @catweasel, cool cartoon btw. It's hard to embellish these weekend freewrite stories much with imagery or metaphor as each of the 3 prompt paragraphs are written to a strict five minutes timer. I think I might of slipped one or two similes in there though. Thanks for your comment and checking out my story :-)

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