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RE: Hello From The Children of Planet Earth...

in #fiction6 years ago

The dynamic that grows between these two characters work so well, the well you build this relationship, where it seems like one is very much leading the other, then, as the story slowly unfolds, it becomes obvious that the lamb had led the wolf. Or has it... On a second read through, Victor almost had a moments doubt, about this student, with his drive and hunger, he can't resist the need to eat, but he lets his victims come willingly, and for a moment, it seems like he hopes Mike will turn back. Your skills for this mystery and story telling on many levels never fails, beautifully done <3

The results and next round are out, and I veyr much hope you'll be back with another <3

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