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RE: Dirty Old Town (Short Fiction) - Part 1
This is so intriguing! I hope to see more soon. I love the descriptions of the city, and the pacing really pulls you along with it, I can't wait to see where this goes and discover more about what is going on.
Thanks @calluna. I'm glad that it has intrigued you, that was my intention. To try and create a small hook with the twist at the end and get that end of chapter effect. There will not be long to wait, I shall be dropping part 2 within a few days as I'm just ironing out the creases today and tomorrow. Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it 👍