Aww, this is awfully sweet. I love how potently you used some of your words, like "mermaid dreams" and "lullaby breeze." It rhymes enough to almost be a poem!
Aww, this is awfully sweet. I love how potently you used some of your words, like "mermaid dreams" and "lullaby breeze." It rhymes enough to almost be a poem!
Thank you, @caleblailmusik! I hope it’s not too rhymy or sing-songy.
Nah, not overtly. Wouldn't that be a good thing if it was though?
Perhaps. I was going for rhythmic, like the waves. :-)
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!