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RE: The Expedition. A short story for Bananafish Contest

in #fiction5 years ago

This is an amazing adventure, with such beautiful descriptions! The stunning outset, scuba diving, the fishes, I very much want to actually go on this trip!

Adore how you've worked so many people in here, and very much appreciate how well suited to the roles each person is ahaha. Of course @theironfelix - who so often claims first blood, would spot the shoal with their eagle eyes. And then of course i very much would be hanging over the edge with them, tasting that salty spray! Then you, @oivas and @dirge who's twists and turns always feel like a well plotted course! Our long standing members @cyemela, @raj808 and @gwilberiol have very much been there though all the tummy churning ups and downs! To have @dirge, @tristancarax, @brisby, @maverickinvictus and @marcoriccardi as deep sea divers couldn't be more fitting ahaha!! @dirge and @tristancarax who are fearless in the darkest depths, who plunge into the abyss below the waves and bring us back the darkest tales, and then @brisby and @marcoriccardi who dive deep in a whole different way - really getting to understand the depths of peoples stories and haiku's, and then @maverickinvictus - who we are very much hoping resurfaces! And of course, not forgetting our fearless leader @f3nix who forged the way, we follow him in faith through poor visibility to the uncharted oceans where our instruments can't plot the way, and he still delivers us through the storm!

Love the beautiful descriptions, entertaining use of characters and fun plot, an enjoyable entry!

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