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RE: Dirty Old Town (Short Fiction) - Part 1
Intense. I liked the formatting of the story, and even though it deals with a dark subject matter on multiple fronts it was descriptively written. My only criticism is that I think you missed a paragraph spacing near the end, but I do that all the time - so I don't think I'm one to judge haha.
Thanks @archive.xyz. It was quite intense writing it too. The next chapter only gets better, intensity-wise that is 😉 Thanks for stopping by and checking out the beginnings of Dirty Old Town