This is such a neat little concept! I can't wait to see where you take it!

Oh, thank you, Caleb! Glad you enjoyed it!

And thank you for writing something enjoyable :P I'm catching up on my feed now, so if you've already posted later parts, you'll see my comments on those soon too :D

Wooo! This is awesome!

Keep writing this!

Thanks, man! And oh, I will.

Great start to a sci-fi (horror?) story. It has a 'District 9' movie feel.

I like the cackle-lady :)

Yeah, I got the same feeling. Looking forward to see where this goes.

Thanks, Neg! Knew you'd enjoy the chicken laugh, haha.