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RE: Story - ALICE - Part 4
hahahahaha!!! nice one. I can't believe I missed that... I think this line will work its way in quite nicely in the next part xD...
It would be a lot better if it went something like:
Camron - Alice!
Jacob - Alice? Who the ____ is Alice?
LOL
Yes, yes. That'd sound contextual. :P
I'm taking a look at the next part now.
Hahaha...