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RE: The Day My City Stood-Still: Chapter 5 (Original)

in #fiction7 years ago

This time your description of the morning is so poetic and beautifully framed that i became the part of it while reading. Calvin is the hope for a common man who faces his currupt fellows every day. Dona represents every common middle class homemaker and at the same time the strrugling life partener of an honest cop. She is a good mother but she should stand by her hubby and should respect his honesty. Waiting for the new common man of your story

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Thank you very much for the kind and encouraging words. Much appreciated..!!

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