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RE: Hank's sudden change: A 50-word short story
Wonder if Imelda becomes a murderer before the next day's dawn.
You know who else says something to the effect of:
Tomorrow is soon enough, right?
ME!!
Luckily I don't drink. (Alcohol drinking is actually forbidden in Islam) But I still have bad habit that I need to get rid of, (and bad habits are also frowned upon in the religion.)
Remember when we were talking about ambiguous endings? I was thinking about that when I wrote this story. The ending is likely too ambiguous! My intent was that he is driving drunk and doesn’t realize the pretty lights are headlights coming straight at him....
Now that you mention it, yeah... The image is implying that, and if this was narrated by voice it would seem more obvious.
Glad I inspired you for something :)
Indeed, you did!